Staus+Light+Rail+1

Jimmy- talk show host Profesor Jason- Scientist Karen-caller about pros Jenny-caller about cons

Jimmy: Hello I am Jimmy i am the host of this talkshow called a little bit about light rail. I am talking about light rail because many states have had some problums with building light rail. A light rail is a high speed train that caries people and runs on electricity. Today we are going to have 2 experts and 1 profeser on light rail call in. they have volentered to talk about light rail with us.

Jimmy:Before we Start talking about light rail I am going to tell you what it is.Light rail is a train that goes very fast and it runs on elecricity.Its made for people not cargo. you would see the light rail in bigger cities like new york instead of smaller cities. the light rail also runs more through towns then heavy rails

Jason: Hello I am Jason I am a profeser at Harvord and i teach students about light rail at Harvord.I will be telling you the facts about light rail.

Karen: Hello I am Karen. I was a student at harvord university and i learned from proffesor jasons class. he asked me to talk about the pros today. also i think light rail is a great idea.

Jimmy: Oh really why do you think that Karen?

Karen:***Because it will cause less poulltion than cars and buses and that would help the enviroment because they use electricty instead of gas,and it would cause less acadents and that would be more safe for people cause it runs on tracks ,it would be a more comfortable for passengers than buses,it would be less noisy then a bus and the light rail is very speedy that would help people get around faster.**
 * All of your pros need to be explained in much more detail **


 * Jason: those are some very interusting pros Karen**


 * Karen:well you did teach them to me professor jason. **


 * Jenny:** *Hello I am jenny. i also am a student at harvord university. proffesor jason asked me to talk about the cons of light rail. and just so you know i dont think light rail is a great idea.

Jimmy: Well why not Jenny

Jenny:It is not very good for long trips plain would be faster for the long trips,Well another problum is that you could have to stand and that could be unsafe,If the rail would use gas it would cost $4 dollars per gallon and thats alot of money from our capitol. ***It is very evpensive to build but it pays off later.If the light rail breaks down there is no route to help the light rail**
 * you also need to have more of them **


 * Jason:that is also true it could run on any kind of electricity and is designed for people too ride not cargo**


 * Jimmy: That is true jason**


 * Jimmy:this is the global perspective,It causes less pollution and that people in other countries dont even have vehichals so light rail will help with transportation.**


 * Jenny: It has less seats than buses and costs more money and that could not be good for some people because they might not have the money. more detail **


 * Jason:evrebody can ride in it,transport is desiged for humans,a lot of people ride in them.**


 * Jimmy:** This is the end of our radio talkshow a little bit about light rail i hope you enjoy the talk show.Now I hpoe you know what light rail is. you need more of a transition. You seem to be in the middle of a conversation and all of a sudden you stop

Jimmy: for more info go to [|www.wisegeek.com]

All: Goodbye

all the way through you need to add more detail. you also need to make it sound more like a conversation. Add transitions between what people are saying to each other so that it sounds like they're talking to each other and not just all taking turns listing things. Introduction and conclusion both need lots of work.